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Lovely (Makoto x reader)

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Time had stopped, the world was silent. Everything just stood motionless in a scene that would always seem to be on pause. Eyes meeting each other and nothing else; almost as if in a movie. The (h/c) haired girl stood alone in a semi-crowded street corner. An olive haired boy stood across from her, waiting for the sign to tell him to go. They both stood there, mesmerized by each other's presence until a small group of people pushed the boy along the street to the side where the girl was.
Finally getting to the other side he strayed from the group that had pushed him along, looking for the girl he was enchanted by.
Where'd she go? The boy thought to himself.
Where'd he go? Asked the girl who was now on the other side of the street.

But let's not focus on her right now, for now let's put our concentration on the boy.
The boy's name was Makoto Tachibana (Tachibana, Makoto whatever you prefer) who is a second year high school student. Or, is going to be anyway.
It was currently the middle of school break and nothing exciting happened over the course of a few weeks.
Until now that is.
The girl Makoto saw drew him in like a magnet (that girl being you of course).

Looking around almost frantically Makoto could not seem to find you anywhere, he felt compelled to find you, as if it were his life's mission.
He had to find you.
Finally, off into the distance Makoto spotted you next to a fruit stand and walked across the street.
When he came within reach of you, he tapped on your shoulder gently, to get your attention.
Only to find that the person he was in front of was definitely not you.
I feel like all of my first/introductory chapters will be short...
So this is a new deviation for you guys (I made this Makoto because he's my favorite ^_^) and I hope you'll like it!
Oh and btw I'll post the parts for the other stories later (like maybe sometime this week)
Next: fav.me/d7h0nt6
-I do not own the characters of free! I only own this story-
oh and the picture I used isn't mine
© 2014 - 2024 kawaiilei
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Nat-Contreras1999's avatar
WHOA!... I don't know why but... That was REALLY cool what I just read!!! Like I imagined it in my mind and now it like... BLOWN NY MIND! O.O I'm gonna keep reading the story because its so AWESOME!!! <(^-^)>